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Blogger Stirred not shaken! said...

Great prose, hope you don't mind me googling you and finding your blog. Let me know.

11:59 AM EST

Blogger VedicVerses said...

Why would I mind? Hmm... but do I know you?

12:16 PM EST

Blogger Neel Bhatt (Zero) said...

Nice poem :-).

Didn't like the ending though.

"N'er a happy ending is there to this tale (???)
For the heart wants what it wants, regardless of the locale!"

And to follow her heart, decided the Yokel,
Started her own company, with a great revenue model.

As the business grew, there was lots of work,
So she hired all her friends and got them to New York!

When the Sun was shinging, they made a lot of hay,
They soon became a force to reckon in the area of the Bay.

Now Yokel was so rich, she didn't need to work,
She hired people to cook & code & do all the boring stuff.

She got herself a spaceship that ran as fast as thought,
She then zip-zapped the globe, meeting all she wanted to, first world or naught!

~ Neel.
I luv happy endings... :-).

Sorry, couldn't resist posting the reply here too... I hope you don't mind me suggesting alternative endings to your creations...

1:27 PM EST

Blogger Neel Bhatt (Zero) said...

Nice poem :-).

Didn't like the ending though.

"N'er a happy ending is there to this tale (???)
For the heart wants what it wants, regardless of the locale!"

And to follow her heart, decided the Yokel,
Started her own company, with a great revenue model.

As the business grew, there was lots of work,
So she hired all her friends and got them to New York!

When the Sun was shinging, they made a lot of hay,
They soon became a force to reckon in the area of the Bay.

Now Yokel was so rich, she didn't need to work,
She hired people to cook & code & do all the boring stuff.

She got herself a spaceship that ran as fast as thought,
She then zip-zapped the globe, meeting all she wanted to, first world or naught!
(C) Nyassa & Neel B.
~ .
I luv happy endings... :-).

Hey Nyssa,
Hope you don't mind ppl writing alternative endings based on your creativity..

1:29 PM EST

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Strange butterfly, this heart.
It always desires the other branch to alight upon.
Possibly all it wants is to never set,
But always stay aflutter?

Lovely poem. Light yet deep and it rhymes all the way. I say the Yokel is pretty rockel! :D

4:31 AM EST

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