Sometimes those voices are help..other times a hinderance i feel that perhaps on this occasion they may have interrupted the silence a little too early? Sometimes introspection and the freedom to think is a welcome gift...
Great job with this challenge. Not such an easy thing to do!
=)
July 10, 2015 at 11:57 AM
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Sunday's Whirligig
Misty world of silence
place beyond people
the beginning of everything
A nowhere spot without end
the only talking I hear
is inside my head again
9 Comments
Close this window Jump to comment formwow, good job and i like how you did not use a lot of other words, but mostly the prompt words
July 5, 2015 at 4:23 AM
You are good, a great writing and use of the prompt words. Have a happy day and new week ahead!
July 5, 2015 at 5:44 AM
Sometimes those voices are help..other times a hinderance i feel that perhaps on this occasion they may have interrupted the silence a little too early? Sometimes introspection and the freedom to think is a welcome gift...
July 5, 2015 at 6:56 AM
Sometimes the voices are all there is. Nicely done!
July 5, 2015 at 8:19 AM
I like this one, especially the second stanza.
July 5, 2015 at 1:15 PM
Oooh....I can relate to this.....!
July 5, 2015 at 2:19 PM
Impressed by the brevity and still using all the words. Clever!
July 5, 2015 at 7:00 PM
Clap, clap! Well said.
July 5, 2015 at 9:33 PM
Great job with this challenge. Not such an easy thing to do!
=)
July 10, 2015 at 11:57 AM