smiles...a day filled with football, guitar and dreams doesn't sound like a bad day at all to me...smiles..and i'm glad you didn't hit the dog.. cool words provided by your grandson..smiles
hahahaha...they gave you ass....and you did well with it...lol....ah, they do have a way of wearing you out now dont they....this i understand...smiles.
Well done and I think this sounds just like Andrew. ha,ha
March 10, 2013 at 7:26 AM
Anonymous said...
if someone had told me to take 10 random words and turn them into an 11 line poem, I would have thought them a cookie or two short of a full packet ;-) You do a fantastic job though. I could not help but smile as I read it.
OMG Look at all the Chemtrails in the picture. Good shot of them. Yesterday, here, too, the deep blue sky became criss-crossed with chemtrails in mid afternoon and I get sick at heart when I see them but it's every day. Good poem....You did it Kiddo.
Great use of all the words the grandsons supplied you with.
March 10, 2013 at 12:55 PM
Poets Pub had a double challenge today. One for words, one for music. Your choice.
My random words were supplied by grandsons: ass, dog, cut, sleep, hit, lazy, sleepy, fuzzy, football, guitar.
This will surely be a challenge.
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Cutting the wheel sharply
I almost hit the lazy dog
If I were not an ass
I would sleep
Pull over
Let my fuzzy mind
Recover
From a day
Filled with football
And guitar
And dreams.
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Close this window Jump to comment formYou met the challenge and then some. Great poem. (and what is it with boys and behinds?)
March 10, 2013 at 1:30 AM
Well done, Gail!
=)
March 10, 2013 at 3:14 AM
Impressive to combine all the words in such a concise form!
March 10, 2013 at 3:18 AM
smiles...a day filled with football, guitar and dreams doesn't sound like a bad day at all to me...smiles..and i'm glad you didn't hit the dog.. cool words provided by your grandson..smiles
March 10, 2013 at 4:14 AM
you did it, and did it well....
March 10, 2013 at 5:03 AM
Sounds like a day with the grandsons had some inspiration. Good one!
March 10, 2013 at 6:42 AM
hahahaha...they gave you ass....and you did well with it...lol....ah, they do have a way of wearing you out now dont they....this i understand...smiles.
March 10, 2013 at 6:58 AM
You worked that very well!
March 10, 2013 at 7:21 AM
Well done and I think this sounds just like Andrew. ha,ha
March 10, 2013 at 7:26 AM
if someone had told me to take 10 random words and turn them into an 11 line poem, I would have thought them a cookie or two short of a full packet ;-)
You do a fantastic job though. I could not help but smile as I read it.
March 10, 2013 at 8:42 AM
That picture is rather poetic, too!
March 10, 2013 at 8:51 AM
Ha - so glad the dog was spared!
March 10, 2013 at 8:55 AM
you pulled it off well!
March 10, 2013 at 9:57 AM
OMG Look at all the Chemtrails in the picture. Good shot of them. Yesterday, here, too, the deep blue sky became criss-crossed with chemtrails in mid afternoon and I get sick at heart when I see them but it's every day.
Good poem....You did it Kiddo.
March 10, 2013 at 9:57 AM
Well done! You rose to that challenge!
March 10, 2013 at 12:32 PM
You knocked it out of the park!
Great use of all the words the grandsons supplied you with.
March 10, 2013 at 12:55 PM