The taxman cometh
Beware his premise of help
Fearful of prison system
Inevitable mail opened and kept
The heat could be worn
The tension sliced
The story ended
With sovereign advice
This was written for a prompt at Imaginary Garden With Real Toads. The challenge was to use three of the twelve words given. I used twelve.
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11 Comments
Close this window Jump to comment formthis one is good but scary because we all fear the taxman coming... good job on using every word...
July 25, 2015 at 5:42 AM
Nobody likes the taxman! Great use of the words! Have a happy weekend!
July 25, 2015 at 6:07 AM
Nailed it . . .
July 25, 2015 at 7:14 AM
Well done, Gail!
Hope you all have a blessed weekend! ♥
July 25, 2015 at 7:14 AM
You certainly strike to the heart of one's fears of the taxman. Your header photos are remarkable. Lovely to see your view of the world.
July 25, 2015 at 7:52 AM
Good one , Our taxes are done by our accountant and this year we got $1500 back WOOHOO ! Have a good weekend !
July 25, 2015 at 7:54 AM
that's so clever of you to use all the words so nicely...
July 25, 2015 at 8:48 AM
Interesting. My sister-and-brother-in-laws both worked for The Taxman. Believe me, they have a deep respect there, too.
July 25, 2015 at 11:35 AM
Wow, you used all twelve and so succinctly and seamlessly. Well done, Gail :-)
July 25, 2015 at 8:00 PM
Gail, you made me smile with your concise take - beware the taxmen!! thanks for adding your voice ~
July 26, 2015 at 4:34 PM
Oh yeah, this is spot on!
July 27, 2015 at 11:22 AM