You see dead people. Did you enjoy that movie? I would like to go to a historical building with you and have you tell me what you experience. It would be mighty interesting. xox
A shrill scream pierced the night air. Somewhere in the darkness, footsteps broke the silence of the night. I cautiously peeked in the window and ?what to my amazing sight appeared? - Gail peeking right back at me :) Thanks, I loved it - You are one Kool Kiddo
FANTASTIC!!! I could see her, I could smell the barracks and feel the breath!!!
Great job Miss Gail!!
God bless ya :o)
April 30, 2012 at 3:48 PM
She cleaned the glass in the captain's quarters unaffected by the foot steps of soldiers long dead.
The fort where she worked summers has shown her many secrets: a shimmering Captain working at his desk, glimpses of military formations on the common, and the indescribable feeling of sadness from the prison barracks. All these she had seen or sensed during her late work hours at the fort.
People years gone had left their mark in the air, the wood, the stone of the old fort.
Clomp! Clomp! Clomp! The change of the evening guard was something she didn't look up for anymore. Although they were all around her and she could sometimes feel a breath on her cheek, she worked alone.
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Close this window Jump to comment formOh I enjoyed this I could feel the breath on the back of my neck, B
April 27, 2012 at 6:44 PM
I think she may like these invisible breathers?
Some live in my house. Whaaaaa!
Love it.
T
April 27, 2012 at 8:27 PM
How do you do it? Amazing . . .you paint and draw with your words . . .
April 27, 2012 at 8:54 PM
You have good writing :)
Have a lovely weekend!
Eva
April 28, 2012 at 1:41 AM
You see dead people. Did you enjoy that movie? I would like to go to a historical building with you and have you tell me what you experience. It would be mighty interesting. xox
April 28, 2012 at 8:13 AM
Cool. Very cool.
(she says with a shiver)
=)
April 28, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Nice piece, Gail. :-)
April 28, 2012 at 2:07 PM
A shrill scream pierced the night air.
Somewhere in the darkness, footsteps broke the silence of the night.
I cautiously peeked in the window and ?what to my amazing sight appeared? - Gail peeking right back at me :)
Thanks, I loved it - You are one Kool Kiddo
April 29, 2012 at 4:45 PM
FANTASTIC!!! I could see her, I could smell the barracks and feel the breath!!!
Great job Miss Gail!!
God bless ya :o)
April 30, 2012 at 3:48 PM