When the creek bed is dry and broken, one can only hope for rain, as in last photo. Words put to great use with even greater photos. Like this. H to M n all :)
Nice one for the prompt- you are really getting good with these poems! Hey, I don't want to scare you or anything, but I think it's going to rain from now to Christmas. I think I'm going to have to go prepper pretty soon and start stocking up on groceries.
Great piece . . . I will come over and load up the cupboards! IN . . .
May 24, 2015 at 7:35 PM
OUT
of words
of funds
of solutions
OUT
of dreams
of hope
of time
OUT
strike three
shoulders to the mat
cupboard's bare
OUT
washed out
smashed up
sliced open
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OUT
dry
broken
empty
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OUT
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Close this window Jump to comment formwhen the day seems as dire as that, one can hope only for a new day.
May 22, 2015 at 10:17 AM
Quite a melancholic list dear!
May 22, 2015 at 10:59 AM
i love number 2 photo, with all those oak thingy that make me sneeze and my eyes itch.. over and OUT... heh heh heh
May 22, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Nonsense. Down, maybe, but never out. ;-)
May 22, 2015 at 11:53 AM
Hoping the anxiety burns OUT by the time we stop to make this list ...
May 22, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Quite vivid and intense.. loved it :)
xoxo
May 22, 2015 at 12:27 PM
Nicely done. I like the staccato feel of this.
May 22, 2015 at 12:36 PM
That really conjoured up some negative feelings when I read that - well done.
Lynne x
May 22, 2015 at 12:45 PM
I agree with Tex, time to move onto a new day..Wishing you a happy Memorial Day Weekend!
May 22, 2015 at 1:03 PM
I know the feeling! Great job with this.
May 22, 2015 at 1:58 PM
Hope once it's out there is things to enjoy..
May 22, 2015 at 3:39 PM
Liked the way you'd set this OUT
Have a good weekend
All the best Jan
May 22, 2015 at 4:56 PM
Well done, Gail.
*hugs* :-)
Have a blessed weekend. ♥
May 22, 2015 at 5:38 PM
out, out, out of that
much love...
May 22, 2015 at 7:00 PM
OUT of words to say thank you... ;-)
Big hugs to you!
May 22, 2015 at 8:12 PM
But, also out in nature.....where one gets replenished when one is OUT of all those things on your list!
May 22, 2015 at 10:16 PM
I definitely know the meaning of "out"...only too well. Food for thought.
So..hi there! How the heck are you?
:)
May 23, 2015 at 1:44 AM
you've been peering in my cupboards? ~
May 23, 2015 at 1:55 AM
Great set of words - I keep trying my hand at poems, but always end up back at prose.
Cheers - Stewart M - Melbourne
May 23, 2015 at 3:05 AM
When the creek bed is dry and broken, one can only hope for rain, as in last photo. Words put to great use with even greater photos. Like this. H to M n all :)
May 23, 2015 at 5:49 AM
Gail,
Nice!
May 23, 2015 at 8:45 AM
Nice one for the prompt- you are really getting good with these poems! Hey, I don't want to scare you or anything, but I think it's going to rain from now to Christmas. I think I'm going to have to go prepper pretty soon and start stocking up on groceries.
May 23, 2015 at 12:35 PM
The definitive list on that topic!
May 24, 2015 at 9:20 AM
Yeah, I can relate for sure.
May 24, 2015 at 10:10 AM
Great piece . . .
I will come over and load up the cupboards!
IN . . .
May 24, 2015 at 7:35 PM