She died at the hands of her killer. He looked deep into her eyes, hearing a sigh from her lips with her last breath - then gently laid her on the floor behind the couch, with only her eyes able to watch him leave through the front door. That's all folks.....
Yes, WooHoo you were first! I do believe I think she is pretty on pink, well that which we can see! But oh my no, blood, did I see it no! Goodness shall she survive this or......... ? !
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December 7, 2014 at 10:37 AM
she is being dragged backwards by the walking dead.
December 7, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Indeed. Often the tale, and the eyes always know.
December 7, 2014 at 11:51 AM
lovely
December 7, 2014 at 12:31 PM
Wow.
December 7, 2014 at 12:58 PM
indeed..wow..didn't see that coming!!
December 7, 2014 at 1:23 PM
Beautifully written...
December 7, 2014 at 2:47 PM
The blood wept a name.. wonder if that's what the forensics found.
December 7, 2014 at 3:24 PM
I almost went in your direction, but took a hard left to the more humouous side! Very well done- excellent!
December 7, 2014 at 3:57 PM
Wow, a bit chilling..
December 7, 2014 at 5:41 PM
HUGS to your family. I like the pink. B
December 7, 2014 at 6:15 PM
Sense of abandonment very apparent. Nicely Gail!
Hank
December 7, 2014 at 8:00 PM
"Her blood wept a name…"
Surely, the coroner must be a poet.
Startling, eerie, good write.
December 7, 2014 at 10:12 PM
Moving & chilling tale.
Hope no one has this fate...
December 7, 2014 at 10:57 PM
My heart just broke a little...
December 7, 2014 at 11:05 PM
so well captured....
December 7, 2014 at 11:39 PM
She loves pink and had to get closer??
December 8, 2014 at 3:10 AM
She died at the hands of her killer. He looked deep into her eyes, hearing a sigh from her lips with her last breath - then gently laid her on the floor behind the couch, with only her eyes able to watch him leave through the front door.
That's all folks.....
December 8, 2014 at 5:27 AM
She is sad, but not down in the dumps.
December 8, 2014 at 8:28 AM
I see you're back to your old tricks again…
;)
December 8, 2014 at 11:59 AM
Well done
December 8, 2014 at 2:59 PM
Well . . .
December 10, 2014 at 7:58 AM
Yes, WooHoo you were first! I do believe I think she is pretty on pink, well that which we can see! But oh my no, blood, did I see it no! Goodness shall she survive this or......... ? !
December 10, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Screaming eyes, indeed...
December 13, 2014 at 12:55 PM