This was clever! I like this one. I only have cats at home. And they see very well in the dark if there is a little light source from somewhere. And they have good noses, just as good as the dogs... So take your cat along and see if she growls! Best wishes, Anna Anna's SC wk 78 'A Study in Black'
I'm not a big fan of the dark. When we used to live waaaaayyyyy, waaaayyyy out in the country where the nighttime looked exactly like that photo...
Let me just say, when the dogs barked at night it really spooked me.
You captured that feeling here so perfectly.
Great writing.
November 14, 2011 at 3:33 PM
I have been tempted, sorely. I've finally surrendered to that temptation. I have decided to join in the writing challenge at......
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Twenty-five words for Study in Black[Image]
The dark was full.
Dad said, “Nothing's there or the dogs will bark.”
My imagination painted images…
nothing there, nothing there...
the dogs growled.
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Close this window Jump to comment formUh-oh! Now MY imagination is painting images...
=)
PS. Good job, Gail, and I'm glad you joined us for the Centus. It's fun, right? And this was a wonderful debut!
October 31, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Darn near fainted..so it is definitely GREAT! I'm tellin' you my friend...YOU have talent!!! TALENT! Got it???? :):)
I'll be serious..not that I am not..but, like Sue, right away, images began in my head. LOVED it!
HUGS!!
October 31, 2011 at 6:38 PM
glad you were tempted...nicely done!
October 31, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Spooky!!! I can imagine it!
October 31, 2011 at 6:47 PM
You do a lot of great writing so I'm glad you gave in to temptation.
Have fun! :)
October 31, 2011 at 7:35 PM
Excellent!
October 31, 2011 at 7:49 PM
This is great, especially debuting on HALLOWEEN!!! BOO!
October 31, 2011 at 7:50 PM
Oh Gail - never quit writing. Your talent amazes me. blessings, marlene
October 31, 2011 at 8:03 PM
Nice. I'd struggle mightily with your writing prompt. Good stuff.
October 31, 2011 at 8:20 PM
I really like this. You're a good writer! Keep on doing it.
October 31, 2011 at 10:05 PM
First I love your new header good job. Second you are stirring my imagination with this, that is very good writing. B
November 1, 2011 at 5:52 AM
Soooo glad you were tempted. Keep it up girl 'cause you've planted images in my head!
Have a marvelous day sweetie!!! :o)
November 1, 2011 at 8:23 AM
This was clever! I like this one.
I only have cats at home. And they see very well in the dark if there is a little light source from somewhere. And they have good noses, just as good as the dogs...
So take your cat along and see if she growls!
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC wk 78 'A Study in Black'
November 1, 2011 at 9:24 AM
Very very good!
snaky tales
November 1, 2011 at 1:05 PM
That made me feel spooked. Well done, Gail.
November 1, 2011 at 6:42 PM
Oooh! That was good!
~Lisa
November 1, 2011 at 10:57 PM
Wow. Cool take on this difficult prompt.
I'm not a big fan of the dark. When we used to live waaaaayyyyy, waaaayyyy out in the country where the nighttime looked exactly like that photo...
Let me just say, when the dogs barked at night it really spooked me.
You captured that feeling here so perfectly.
Great writing.
November 14, 2011 at 3:33 PM