Bravo ... I love the flow and beat of this poem ... nicely written!
November 9, 2015 at 10:15 PM
Mindlovemisery's Menagerie
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BLUE IS THE RIGHT COLOR
For carefully folded paper stars
for words that try to hold their meaning
for raindrops that never reach the soul
Blue is the right color
for dreams of youth
cast upon life's Ferris Wheel
torn, worn, scattered
Blue is the right color
when memories hold you
with nothing leftÂ
except the unraveling
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November 8, 2015 at 9:35 AM
perfect words for the images!! i always wondered why the color blue was associated with being down or depressed. one for google perhaps!!
very nice!!!!!!
November 8, 2015 at 10:13 AM
BLUE IS THE RIGHT COLOR
for words that try to hold their meaning
beautiful work Gail!
mindlovemisery
November 8, 2015 at 11:28 AM
Blue is the right color for me..
November 8, 2015 at 12:02 PM
Ah. That's just so beautiful. Perfect. :-)
-HA
November 8, 2015 at 1:16 PM
This time of year seems to bring out the Blues too!
November 8, 2015 at 2:15 PM
Brings a whole new meaning to "the blues". Beautifully written!
November 8, 2015 at 2:16 PM
Very nice, Gail- your poetry is always so good. Have a lovely Sunday!
November 8, 2015 at 3:22 PM
So lovely! And blue is my favourite colour.
November 8, 2015 at 5:33 PM
I like it! I like it! :)
November 9, 2015 at 2:29 AM
Beautiful! It's my color.
November 9, 2015 at 8:28 AM
Blue-wonderful! Blue just happens to be my favorite color!
November 9, 2015 at 6:16 PM
Bravo ... I love the flow and beat of this poem ... nicely written!
November 9, 2015 at 10:15 PM