I enjoyed the light 6W6 and felt the impact of the the the very serious SC, one of the more compelling pieces I've read on that painful topic. Great writing!
Wonderful writing. Very impressive blog, and I totallt identify with your profile.hope you will visit me: McGuffy's Reader http://www.mcguffysreader.blogspot.com
the poem is a little to dark for me. dark and to realistic and it speaks the truth of our times. that is what is scary about it. love the six words of our life. here is mine. My daily life belongs to computer
Glad the knee n ankle are better and you are moving on with the job. We just have to see the finished product. Nice photo of Fall Colours and NOW - great poem Gail, dark, deep n gritty - You captured it all girl. Love your dark side :)
Wow, this is amazing, and funly spooky- I actually came to read your 6WS- I haven't even posted my centus yet and usually post before I ever read any! Now I'm confused how I got here....from 6WS!
Youre displaying your darker side again. I'm glad you found a venture to do this in. I hope you don't identify too strongly with this. It lurks in all of us but we don't all have the talent to expose it. Or the guts for that matter.
October 8, 2012 at 3:40 PM
Want to play along? All that's necessary to participate is to describe your life (or something) in a phrase using just six words. For more information, try clicking here. Feel free to explain or not explain. Add an image, a video, a song, nothing. I love seeing what everyone does with their entries.
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ON REDECORATING:
Painted, caulked, bruised, but not bleeding.
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Time to have fun with Jenny Matlock with her Saturday Centus. PROMPT: "How beautifully leaves grow old." WORD COUNT - Not to exceed 105 (including the prompt) STYLE OF WRITING - Any
PICTURES - Any Additional The regular restrictions apply: PG, no splitting of the prompt, play nicely and visit the other links, please.
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No one knew
No one really cared
No one missed the jerk
That lived upstairs.
A little girl was missing
They looked every where
The only thing ever found
Was her doll upon his stairs.
He watched children closely
Carried candy in his pocket
Just talked to them mostly
But ended up on the court docket.
I knew the girl
She’s mine you know
I’d seen them talking
Days in a row.
The rules are no body
Criminals can’t be bound
Not guilty the verdict
Upset the town.
I the executioner
Was secretive and bold
The body won’t be found
How beautifully leaves turn old.
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18 Comments
Close this window Jump to comment formlaughing at your decorating one. :)
and the dark side of you always scares me a bit. i think we are all capable of a lot...
October 6, 2012 at 12:02 PM
Your Centus made me shudder...good writing to move reader so much!
October 6, 2012 at 12:21 PM
Creepy thought ! Have a good day !
October 6, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Whoa. I did not see that coming from that point of view AT ALL. That was INTENSE. My eyes got big and my mouth dropped open!
October 6, 2012 at 1:33 PM
We have to renovate again and we keep putting it off. Our excuses include company, vacation and timing.
October 6, 2012 at 2:15 PM
hummm
"animal shit covers all my pants!"
hows that?
October 6, 2012 at 3:52 PM
whoa...heavy stuff. Very eerie. Of course, I liked it.
October 6, 2012 at 5:15 PM
I enjoyed the light 6W6 and felt the impact of the the the very serious SC, one of the more compelling pieces I've read on that painful topic. Great writing!
October 6, 2012 at 7:26 PM
Haha!
You and John had great ones. :o)
Lovely photos, too!
October 6, 2012 at 8:40 PM
Wonderful writing. Very impressive blog, and I totallt identify with your profile.hope you will visit me: McGuffy's Reader
http://www.mcguffysreader.blogspot.com
October 6, 2012 at 10:55 PM
Hi, glad you survived remodeling. Your poem gave me the chills!
October 7, 2012 at 1:06 AM
the poem is a little to dark for me. dark and to realistic and it speaks the truth of our times. that is what is scary about it.
love the six words of our life. here is mine.
My daily life belongs to computer
October 7, 2012 at 5:33 AM
Glad the knee n ankle are better and you are moving on with the job. We just have to see the finished product. Nice photo of Fall Colours and NOW - great poem Gail, dark, deep n gritty - You captured it all girl. Love your dark side :)
October 7, 2012 at 7:47 AM
Hmmnn . . . scary and dark . . . but you certainly can create!
October 7, 2012 at 8:55 AM
Dark and telling.
October 7, 2012 at 9:18 AM
Wow, this is amazing, and funly spooky- I actually came to read your 6WS- I haven't even posted my centus yet and usually post before I ever read any! Now I'm confused how I got here....from 6WS!
October 7, 2012 at 12:58 PM
oops, I figured it out, your link at 6WS brings me here!
October 7, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Youre displaying your darker side again. I'm glad you found a venture to do this in. I hope you don't identify too strongly with this. It lurks in all of us but we don't all have the talent to expose it. Or the guts for that matter.
October 8, 2012 at 3:40 PM