I do believe Gail, that you could make a poem out of anything. This poem started out in a romantic way and ended with a sizzle - sounds like romance to me. he,he
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Trick or Treat
You stroked my skin
Promising me
Candle light
And Smiles
You cut me
Eviscerated me
And set my ass on fire
You call that Romance?
Happy Halloween, Jack!
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Close this window Jump to comment formDepends on how that ass was set on fire...
Wait, did I say that out loud???
October 5, 2013 at 7:46 PM
Good question to ponder at Halloween....
October 5, 2013 at 8:15 PM
Not romance, more like punishment, i think ~ Really enjoyed your sense of humor ~
October 5, 2013 at 8:50 PM
This was a fun read and I like Alex's comment about the ass being set on fire.
October 5, 2013 at 8:55 PM
hahaha...yes, our view of romance seems often sorely lacking....gotta watch messing with fire you know...smiles.
October 5, 2013 at 8:59 PM
bwahaha
October 5, 2013 at 9:43 PM
Ha.. Pumpkin romance seems to be far from tender
October 6, 2013 at 1:24 AM
haha... that was fun... yeah.. not everyone has the same idea of what romance is...haha
October 6, 2013 at 1:54 AM
LOL LOL ROFL ROFL LOVE IT LOVE IT
October 6, 2013 at 4:48 AM
OOPS! forgot to say I GET IT I GET IT.
October 6, 2013 at 4:48 AM
I do believe Gail, that you could make a poem out of anything. This poem started out in a romantic way and ended with a sizzle - sounds like romance to me. he,he
October 6, 2013 at 6:18 AM
Love the 180 turn from stanza 1 to stanza 2. Well done!
October 6, 2013 at 6:36 AM
That was fun!
October 6, 2013 at 7:02 AM
HA HA HA ---good one!!
October 6, 2013 at 8:34 AM
Very funny, and wry and caustic and perfect! Buwhahahahaha
October 6, 2013 at 10:03 AM
So funny - love it!
Lynne x
October 6, 2013 at 10:28 AM
Bwahahahahahahahaha. That was so good I linked you to my Silly Sunday post. I laughed out loud.
Have a fabulous day. :)
October 6, 2013 at 10:58 AM
Ok this was funny! Coming from a pumpkins point of view...LOL!
October 6, 2013 at 11:30 AM
LOL i agree with Sandee it was funny heheh!
Have a pumpkintastic week
October 6, 2013 at 11:31 AM
Bought a pumpkin for good luck, at the CVS after getting my meds
5 minutes later got call, wife was in an accident.
Bad Pumpkin!
October 6, 2013 at 11:39 AM
Happy Halloween, Jack! I can hear Uncle Si saying that! ;)
October 6, 2013 at 1:42 PM
"You cut me
Eviscerated me
And set my ass on fire
You call that Romance?"
LMAO!! Too funny. This is great! Well done!
October 6, 2013 at 2:08 PM
lol! oooh, its getting hot over here~ Alex's comment had me howling and you set me on fire-whoa
October 6, 2013 at 9:38 PM
Sounds like the perfect Halloween to me.
October 7, 2013 at 9:54 AM
hahaha
Gotta love it.
=)
October 7, 2013 at 2:30 PM
Excellent!
October 7, 2013 at 5:03 PM