ha,ha Gail - This is way toooo funny - I laughed out loud at the end. You are good girl. Keep em coming. Thanks for this - I shall send a link to my neice - she will love this. Cheers
Apparently, she just needed a little more practice and shoes that stayed on better. Too bad she died on her first attempt. People should always get a second chance. Maybe she'll do better in heaven with her wings on. xox
This is the best little use of a picture prompt. EVER!
Love your creativity here!
Brilliant!
June 2, 2012 at 6:01 PM
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Time once again to meet the weekly challenge. The Rules: Use the picture below (horizontally or vertically) as inspiration for your story. Number of words: 100. Style of writing: Any.
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Scientifically created Golden Anywheres
Had this lady walking on air
Crossing the ceiling she frowned
She was up but her dress stayed down.
What can I do? She looked around
She could clean the ceiling just like before
But now she could sweep the dust to the floor.
Sweeping to her heart's content
The floor was quickly covered with lint.
The ceiling was finished
Her shoes held her tight
Her legs were burning from the heel's height.
Turning to go from ceiling to wall
The shoes came off.
She died from the fall.
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Close this window Jump to comment formOh no, till death tore her apart from her dear shoes! Great centus...I like the upside down switch!
May 26, 2012 at 4:09 PM
Love it, Gail!! That's taking housecleaning a little too far!
And yes, high heels really wrecked my feet! Rod was sad to see them go, but he really had no say in the matter!!
May 26, 2012 at 4:17 PM
Oh Gail, that was funny....glad her dress didn't fall :)
May 26, 2012 at 4:32 PM
ha,ha Gail - This is way toooo funny - I laughed out loud at the end. You are good girl. Keep em coming. Thanks for this - I shall send a link to my neice - she will love this. Cheers
May 26, 2012 at 5:44 PM
That's really taking cleaning to the extreme lol. Too bad all that work ended badly.
May 26, 2012 at 6:41 PM
Very funny! until she died, that is. ;)
May 26, 2012 at 7:06 PM
Thanks for reaffirming my contention that housework is deadly!
Great job!
May 26, 2012 at 7:43 PM
Apparently, she just needed a little more practice and shoes that stayed on better. Too bad she died on her first attempt. People should always get a second chance. Maybe she'll do better in heaven with her wings on. xox
May 26, 2012 at 8:25 PM
How sad that she did all that good work for naught...durn shoes!
May 27, 2012 at 6:48 AM
I think I'd like a pair
of Golden Anywheres...
minus the fall, of course.
;)
May 27, 2012 at 9:17 AM
fabulous, absolutely fabulous!!!
May 27, 2012 at 7:19 PM
I was laughing out loud! Great centus. laurie
May 28, 2012 at 8:29 PM
Did not expect the sad twist at the end. Funny till then...
May 29, 2012 at 1:23 AM
LOL, very funny poem. I love picturing her walking on the ceiling and then falling off the walls
visiting from Jenny's
May 29, 2012 at 1:35 PM
I knew there was a reason I did not like house cleaning!
~Naila Moon
http://writing-out-of-the-blue.blogspot.com/2012/05/dressed-for-successa-story.html
June 1, 2012 at 1:04 AM
Gail!
Bravo! Bravo!
This is the best little use of a picture prompt. EVER!
Love your creativity here!
Brilliant!
June 2, 2012 at 6:01 PM