Loved the rebel character revealed here, fun to read! x
April 28, 2015 at 11:26 AM
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Sunday's Whirligig
Use the words above and create poem or prose.
Clip this diaphanous garment from me
The lace is mottled with shades of red
Out, damned stain!
Dissonantpurse, be gone!
I demand iridescent cloth
To cover me in crying weather
Alone wrapped in velour
I write with ink no more.
Tears cause words to run
And that's what I'm posting
for
Sunday's Whirligig
12 Comments
Close this window Jump to comment formVery economically done too. I don't you are alone in not writing with ink. I enjoyed the read.
April 26, 2015 at 2:39 AM
Oops! There is a "think" missing after don't.
April 26, 2015 at 2:40 AM
Very concise and absolutely lovely. I like the idea of crying weather.
Keith's Ramblings
April 26, 2015 at 3:39 AM
Lady Macbeth runs out of ink...very amusing take on the words.Enjoyed !
April 26, 2015 at 4:20 AM
I enjoyed that.
Thanks Gail.
All the best Jan
April 26, 2015 at 4:29 AM
It's crying weather here today. I am a fan of succinct poetry and ecoomical use of the wordle words.
April 26, 2015 at 4:41 AM
your dark side reigns again... I like it.
April 26, 2015 at 6:08 AM
Why am I picturing Mary Queen of Scots?
April 26, 2015 at 6:16 AM
You used most of them. Those were some tough words.
April 26, 2015 at 7:35 AM
I love the way you have used the words softly to create such a deep blood stained story
April 26, 2015 at 10:01 AM
Looks mighty fine to me!
April 26, 2015 at 3:43 PM
Loved the rebel character revealed here, fun to read! x
April 28, 2015 at 11:26 AM