It's creepy and has a melancholy feel but so well written and illustrated by the photos.
September 9, 2015 at 2:59 PM
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Mindlovemisery's Menagerie Writing Prompt
The crow warned him
"Do not give your heart"
"She's mad but she's magic"
the poor lost soul replied
His slate wiped clean
by opiates shared
He was buried beneath the tree
as she escaped by air
15 Comments
Close this window Jump to comment formThis makes me think of Edgar Allen Poe.
September 8, 2015 at 5:58 AM
That's almost like stumbling into a conversation. Each couplet sparks different ideas.
September 8, 2015 at 6:29 AM
I agree with Liza, shades of Poe here today
September 8, 2015 at 7:09 AM
A female pusher, and 'she's more.' Quick and dirty, a nice read, Gail.
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September 8, 2015 at 8:59 AM
This is wonderful. Thanks dear lady.
September 8, 2015 at 9:49 AM
Well done !
September 8, 2015 at 9:56 AM
It's not just about a sweet smile.. there are dangers also elsewhere.
September 8, 2015 at 10:24 AM
wonderful words created for the images!!! it feels a little frisky!!!
September 8, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Love that ending!
September 8, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Bleak relationship.
September 8, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Should have listened to that crow.
September 9, 2015 at 2:25 AM
Yeah this has me imagining. Very nice!
September 9, 2015 at 5:05 AM
I like that line- She's mad but she's magic - nicely incorporated into your poem.
September 9, 2015 at 8:38 AM
Pretty cool response to this prompt. And I agree with others that there are elements of Poe here. Not surprising, considering your "dark side."
;)
September 9, 2015 at 10:40 AM
It's creepy and has a melancholy feel but so well written and illustrated by the photos.
September 9, 2015 at 2:59 PM