You really brought it full circle!

December 8, 2014 at 7:08 AM

Very interesting circular poem. Thanks for sharing.

December 8, 2014 at 7:52 AM

really like how you can pick any word as the start of a phrase just by stringing it to the next line. very creative!

December 8, 2014 at 8:50 AM

I love the feel of word association this has. Very nice, very.

December 8, 2014 at 9:16 AM

an amazing loop!

December 8, 2014 at 10:07 AM

This has a really cool structure.

December 8, 2014 at 10:24 AM

What a great use of form. This one is a departure for you. It's good to try new things!

=)

December 8, 2014 at 11:53 AM

That's beautiful!
Lynne x

December 8, 2014 at 12:49 PM

The karma moon on broken glass.. yes I can feel that feeling.

December 8, 2014 at 2:19 PM

the moon will always catch up


focused implementation

December 8, 2014 at 2:49 PM

I agree: an interesting look at cycles and connections!

December 8, 2014 at 3:07 PM

I love the karma moon! Beautiful.

December 8, 2014 at 5:35 PM

Life is a ball! It will just go on! Only some concerted efforts will make it detour or deflect a little! Nicely Gail!

Hank

December 8, 2014 at 6:00 PM

Am back, Gail. I just read a memoir called When Broken Glass Floats, about the life of a young girl and her family under the Khmer Rouge. An amazing life, and she rose out of that life of starvation, slave labor and oppression to prove that our spirits do rise.........your lines about the broken glass made me think of that book.

December 8, 2014 at 11:40 PM

Circular in sounds and happenings. Brilliant.

December 9, 2014 at 1:27 AM

That broken glass cuts such vivid imagery.

December 9, 2014 at 9:31 AM

Very intriguing.

December 9, 2014 at 7:59 PM

Liked your creating . . .

December 11, 2014 at 4:31 AM

This is both clever and full of truth (some joyful, some dark). Very nicely done.

December 11, 2014 at 4:40 PM