The last six words capture everything the poem is about - we encourage and support each other together - what more could one want and what a world it would be if it were widespread. Love this.
Creative attempt for Imaginary Garden With Real Toads
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Some would think
I'm the strong one
You forever
Hold me up
In your arms
In your heart
I am the weak one
Encouraged
Supported
By your strength
I topple
You catch me
Opposites are day and night
They make a fine pair
And so do we
Apart
We are haunted
And hungry
For the next time...
23 Comments
Close this window Jump to comment formVery nicely done once again.
Have a fabulous day. :)
September 14, 2013 at 9:38 AM
Not opposite - you compliment each other!
Like the photo.
September 14, 2013 at 9:49 AM
I love this Gail, I can relate to it well. Without them, where would we be? Lost, I am sure.
September 14, 2013 at 9:50 AM
Well written... and so true!
September 14, 2013 at 10:12 AM
you are both blessed.
September 14, 2013 at 10:22 AM
love it and it goes with the photo perfectly.
September 14, 2013 at 10:25 AM
Beautiful!
September 14, 2013 at 10:40 AM
This is true for SM and me as well. Thanks, this is lovely. Oma Linda
September 14, 2013 at 11:28 AM
It aches to read this. It is how I feel, and how lost we each would be when the other passes on. Lovely, Gail.
September 14, 2013 at 12:23 PM
Beautifully done.
September 14, 2013 at 12:27 PM
Your love of nature and the use of emotive language is stunning here. Thank you so much for writing! :)
September 14, 2013 at 3:56 PM
Great words and from the heart, too!...:)JP
September 14, 2013 at 4:58 PM
Thanks - your thoughts caused me to stop and contemplate my own life and see the truths in what you say.
September 14, 2013 at 5:13 PM
Ooh. Strange, but nice, too, Gail.
Hope you all have a wonderful Sunday. ♥
September 14, 2013 at 6:56 PM
This is quite lovely. Difficult to see ourselves as others do.
September 14, 2013 at 7:03 PM
Well written!!
Nice picture too :-)
September 14, 2013 at 8:27 PM
All I can do is smile at your beautiful post... :-)
September 14, 2013 at 8:46 PM
Excellent . . . in style and partnering . . .
September 15, 2013 at 6:27 AM
The last six words capture everything the poem is about - we encourage and support each other together - what more could one want and what a world it would be if it were widespread. Love this.
September 15, 2013 at 7:49 AM
Sweet tribute to your man?? Very nice, Gail
September 15, 2013 at 8:19 AM
This is so beautiful, Gail! What a tribute!
September 15, 2013 at 9:38 AM
That is so beautiful and romantic!
Lynne x
September 15, 2013 at 11:10 AM
Very sweet. :)
September 15, 2013 at 10:09 PM