That is something to always remember. I like that part, " alarming secret storm with bronze razors." Well said and written. Have a peaceful and restful Sunday.
Yes..a succinct use of the prompts but every word counts....just as every idle word doesn't - QED! and i absolutely agree...nothing worse than gossip...
Sunday's Whirligig
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Gossip is a weapon
an alarming secret storm
with bronze razors
instead think and
speak with unsoured truth
drink when thirsty
bathe in a love poem
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June 14, 2015 at 9:51 AM
Yes, I like this !
Hope you are having a peaceful Sunday.
All the best Jan
June 14, 2015 at 10:14 AM
That is something to always remember. I like that part, " alarming secret storm with bronze razors." Well said and written. Have a peaceful and restful Sunday.
June 14, 2015 at 10:25 AM
So true well done. Hug B
June 14, 2015 at 10:30 AM
What a beautiful reminder :-)
June 14, 2015 at 11:41 AM
Well done . I like it ! and yes Gossip can be used as a weapon and from the wrong mouths can be vicious ! Thanks for sharing , Have a good day !
June 14, 2015 at 11:41 AM
Good advice !
June 14, 2015 at 7:45 PM
I forgot to say....excellent use of the words in so brief a poem...yours is really impressive. !
June 14, 2015 at 7:48 PM
Exactly . . .
Good One!
June 15, 2015 at 7:01 AM
Yes..a succinct use of the prompts but every word counts....just as every idle word doesn't - QED! and i absolutely agree...nothing worse than gossip...
June 15, 2015 at 7:21 AM
So short, yet so charged with life! I understand what it means to drink when I'm thirsty and to bathe in love poems---what fantastic images!
Timeless Tales
June 15, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Great post! I really hate gossip.
June 15, 2015 at 10:29 AM
Couldn't agree more…and well said.
=)
July 1, 2015 at 12:53 PM