Amazing sequel I must say with life and death at the same time :)...aajkal raftaar-e-zindagii kuch aisa hee rang la rahi hai and hence I wrote a poetry on my hindi blog too...jo raftaar per hee kuch rang chidakti hai:)
good work ...keep it up dear
Cheers

10 November, 2006 23:23

Awww man...
Poem on life and dead is nicely put down in words here.

zehreeley hont laa zaraa
maut paas tuu aa zaraa
aa gale lagaa mujhe
mujhko miTaa tuu shauq se
but dunno why...am not having a good feeling afta reading these lines :(

13 November, 2006 03:38

Gosh! one can never make out that the writer is someone hailing from south where hindi, urdu, gazal and kavya seem to be alien (conventionally). nice write up.

Yeah, same template...and thanks for the visit.
happy blogging!

15 November, 2006 10:14

Wow, I like the changed template.Here after a long time.

Still comprehending the mood of the poem.

17 November, 2006 22:39

sorry all for the late response.
Thanks Dawn! :) i visited your blog too, good poem.

arzOOOn, Aap yahaan aage mehfil to raushan hogaya.. Thanks for visiting! agree, not the most positive theme :)

Thanks illusion :) see ya around

edu, so u have left UK! and guess u r no longer unemployed ;) It was just a spark of thought which shaped into this one!

22 November, 2006 20:31