@nitin, yes, i do agree. I have never tried doing that. I want to have a hindi version of this blog, but have not got around to making it happen yet! Thanks for visiting
@ani chettaa, hope you got my last mail! r u able to create the track? :)
@dawn, thank u, thank u :)) I hope one of my friends will like it and turn it into a song. I did not focus on any rhyming on this one. Most of this is just free flow of words!
01 October, 2006 07:43
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(Original poetry by @kaunquest)
बिताई जैसे ज़िंदगी बेवजहा बेवजहा
खोगये मेरे दिन बे-निशान बे-निशान
रूखे सूखे उन लम्हों के पत्ते मिलगये धूल में
दरख्त ये वक़्त का हिलता नहीं झुकता नहीं
गुलिस्तान नहीं यहां
रास्ते भी तो नहीं
बे-लिबास साये है
और क्या ज़मीन पे
मैं यही तो दफन हूँ
दश्त की आवाज़ हूँ
हवा की मैं सांस हूँ
भूला हुआ कोई राज़ हूँ
अरमानों की अनबन नहीं
एहसास के दर्पण नहीं
न दिखाई दूँ न सुनाई दूँ
मगर ये नहीं के मैं नहीं
bitaai jaise zindagii, be-wajaa,be-wajaa
kho gaye mere din, be-nishaan, be-nishaan
ruukhe, suukhe, un lamhon ke patte.. mil gaye dhuul mein
darakt ye waqt kaa..hiltaa nahiin, jhuktaa nahiin
gulsitaan nahiin yahaan,
raaste bhi to nahiin
be-libaas saaye hai,
aur kyaa zameen pe
mai yahii to dafn hoon,
dasht kii aawaaz hoon
hawaa ki mai saans hoon,
bhuulaa huaa raaz hoon
armaanon ki anban nahiin,
ehsaas ke darpan nahiin,
na dikhaai doon na sunaai doon
magar ye nahiin ke mai nahiin
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Close this window Jump to comment formNice thoughts there :)
24 September, 2006 07:53
Hi, I see that most of your posts are in Hindi but written in English(Roman Script).
Will be a great reading if you start typing in Hindi(Devanagari) ...Its very easy to write Devanagari.
24 September, 2006 18:46
hai ajay ...
yezhuthi thakarkuka yanallo.........poratte poratte..
anil bs
25 September, 2006 22:46
mai yahii to dafn hoon,is dasht kii aawaaz hoon
hawaa ka mai saans hoon,bhuulaa huaa ik raaz hoon
WOW....such amazing words and I wonder if anyone can compose this into music :)....I hope u get my msg...will look forward to hear it
Amazing daad kabool farmayein huzur
Cheers
29 September, 2006 03:36
@pallavi, thanks :)
@nitin, yes, i do agree. I have never tried doing that. I want to have a hindi version of this blog, but have not got around to making it happen yet! Thanks for visiting
@ani chettaa, hope you got my last mail! r u able to create the track? :)
@dawn, thank u, thank u :)) I hope one of my friends will like it and turn it into a song. I did not focus on any rhyming on this one. Most of this is just free flow of words!
01 October, 2006 07:43