"beethe hue lamhon ki kasak saath to hogi,kwaabon mein hi ho chaahe mulaaqaath to hogi..."
Aap hi ke bol hain,Aur mulaaqaath ke liye kwaabon ki kya jaroorat ,yehaan, isi safar mein hogi,Humne apna Aashiyan badal diya,par dost nahi,rahe badalgayi lekin log wahi puraane milthe gaye,Tashreef laayiyega kabhi humaare naye aashiyane pe:)
achcha likha hai aapne! sabse achchi lines ye lagin Kahaan shuruu huaa safar, hai aage kaun see Dagar be-karaan jahaan, ik boond hum, beh jaayenge yoon befikar waqai bahut khoob!
had aur dagar feminine gender hain isliye junoon woh jiski hadh nahin aur hai aage kaun see dagar jyada upyukta rahega.
Btw, I heard your rendition of "Khamoshi" the other day, but did not get time to comment there. You have a fabulous voice, my friend, and the poetry is mindblowing!
@alapana, aap ka yoon laut aana achaa lagaa.. aapke naye aashiyaane mein hum aayenge zaroor..
@oxy_moron, shukriya.. sahi farmaaya janaab..
@manish, thanks buddy. hindi/urdu not being my mother tongue is certainly a disadvantage. I try to proof read before I post, i guess I forgot this time. I will correct it.
@arundhati, you dissappeared for a few days. Glad to see that u are back in action. Thanks for that.. I will do some more audio posts soon.
@megha, welcome here. Yes, its all my own poetry. Glad to know you liked it. Please keep visiting.
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22 March, 2006 01:11
"beethe hue lamhon ki kasak saath to hogi,kwaabon mein hi ho chaahe mulaaqaath to hogi..."
Aap hi ke bol hain,Aur mulaaqaath ke liye kwaabon ki kya jaroorat ,yehaan, isi safar mein hogi,Humne apna Aashiyan badal diya,par dost nahi,rahe badalgayi lekin log wahi puraane milthe gaye,Tashreef laayiyega kabhi humaare naye aashiyane pe:)
22 March, 2006 11:54
bahot khoob!
unse miliye to khushi hoti hai unse mil kar
sheher ke duusre logon se jo kam jhoothein hain :)
24 March, 2006 12:30
achcha likha hai aapne! sabse achchi lines ye lagin
Kahaan shuruu huaa safar,
hai aage kaun see Dagar
be-karaan jahaan, ik boond hum,
beh jaayenge yoon befikar
waqai bahut khoob!
had aur dagar feminine gender hain isliye junoon woh jiski hadh nahin aur hai aage kaun see dagar jyada upyukta rahega.
26 March, 2006 07:22
Woah!! Wonderful, Kaun..
Btw, I heard your rendition of "Khamoshi" the other day, but did not get time to comment there. You have a fabulous voice, my friend, and the poetry is mindblowing!
28 March, 2006 02:52
wow its superb
is it written by u?
07 April, 2006 05:02
@dawn, shukriyaa.. hauslaa afzaai ka..:)
@alapana, aap ka yoon laut aana achaa lagaa.. aapke naye aashiyaane mein hum aayenge zaroor..
@oxy_moron, shukriya.. sahi farmaaya janaab..
@manish, thanks buddy. hindi/urdu not being my mother tongue is certainly a disadvantage. I try to proof read before I post, i guess I forgot this time. I will correct it.
@arundhati, you dissappeared for a few days. Glad to see that u are back in action. Thanks for that.. I will do some more audio posts soon.
@megha, welcome here. Yes, its all my own poetry. Glad to know you liked it. Please keep visiting.
07 April, 2006 17:44
ajay:
Send me a devanagari version of the lyrics if possible. I have tuned this song already.
16 May, 2006 20:09