Wow!! man what a poet... really beautiful stuff... bas laga ki dil ne khaie hai koi chot... isiliye dard aaya hai bhahar... leke ek kavita ka aakaar... :) GBU
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(Original poetry by @kaunquest) कातिल नहीं तू मेरा रहनुमा है परेशान हूँ तेरे तलवार पे क्यों लहू मेरा है
ज़रा तो आँख नम करो जहान की बात कम करो बेवफा हमें ज़रा प्यार से ख़त्म करो बेशुमार दौलत गुरूर की लुटाई जो तुमने शौक़ से कर्ज़ा कर्ज़ा चुकाया था हम ने भी दिल को जलाया था बस लेटे रहोगे फर्श पे दरिया बहेंगे अश्क के चले आएंगे वही तैरने तिनके हमारी याद के घबरा गए के तुम ज़रा इस बुझती लौ की तड़प से हम तनहा यूं भीग जाएंगे
रुस्वाई की बरसात में
Kaatil nahin tu meraa rehnumaa hai Pareshaan hoon, tere talwaar pe kyon lahuuu meraa hai...
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Zaraa to aankh nam karo,
jahaan ki baat kam karo
Bewafaaa hamein zaraa,
pyaar se khatam karo
Beshumaar daulat guroor ki,
lutaayii jo tum ne shauq se
karzaa karzaa chukaayaa tha,
hum ne bhi dil ko jalaaya tha
Bas leTe rahoge farsh pe,
dariyaaa bahenge ashk ke
Chale aayenge wohi tairne,
Woh tinke hamaari yaad ke
Ghabraa gaye kya tum zaraa,
Is bujhti lau ki taDap se
Hum tanhaa hi bheeg jaayenge
rusvaai ki barsaat mein
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Close this window Jump to comment formWow!! man what a poet...
really beautiful stuff...
bas laga ki dil ne khaie hai koi chot... isiliye dard aaya hai bhahar... leke ek kavita ka aakaar...
:)
GBU
26 February, 2006 18:57
Qatil nahin tu mera rehnuma hai
Pareshaan hoon, tere talwaar pe kyon lahuuu mera hai...
Wallah!!! sher bahut hee khub hai...!
nazm mein bhi bewafayee ki gehari chot aur dard ko bhi khub darshaya hai...lafzon ka istemaal sahi hei lekin...kheen 'h' ke aajane se...malayalee chova :) mehasus hota hei...
otherwise an awesome poetry....daad hee daad kabool karein...
cheers
02 March, 2006 02:48
I have to agree with Sehar. It's beautifully written and very evocative emotionally.
04 March, 2006 04:53
Maar hi daaloge!!
Wah wah kya baat hai hujoor ki
Apni shayri se dil chura liya
Lagta hain aapne bahut choot khai hai
Take care
Keep smiling
07 March, 2006 06:48
Folks, Thanks ever so much for your kind comments. sorry for the delay in replying
@manish, thoDi bebasi na ho agar, to bekhudi bhi kyaa hai. :)
@dawn, Thank u. Malayalee chova?? Not intentional though!
@mystique, Thank u. idhar aathe rahiyegaa, aap jaise meharbaanon se hi to is mehfil mein rang hai
@neetika, aisi thaareef se to hum bhi mar jaaye :) One should touch on every emotion, and dard is always good for poetry. hai ki nahin...
17 March, 2006 06:59
tuned this too man :)
30 May, 2006 02:21