Well how do you manage to write such awesome poetries??? Amazing(all i can say) I should suggest you write a book, and i'll be the first one to buy ur book.... :))))>>>)))) Hugs n Kisses
@neetika, Thank u. :) khudaa kare aapki yeh dua asar kar jaaye... Kabhi ik kithaab likhe hum aur aap ko nazar kar jaaye.. I am glad that if I ever write a book, atleast one copy will get sold! and so maybe someday, I will. Thanks a lot :)
@emotions, Thank u! Keep visiting and I will keep writing :) Isii deewaangi ke hum deewane hai..
@Manish, This should have been a V-day post, but was very busy this week. :) Thank u
hey !! Thanks for dropping by pal !! Uhhmmm if i were to comment on your poems i would rather be quiet. cus its beyond words.
Everytime i read something like this i am lost in time..... a place where nothing else exists but all those memories.... and i sit and smile to myself...until i am banged it reality yet again.....
Thanks for being such a amazing poet.....and i bet you have an equally amazing and pure heart.
Folks, sorry abt the delay in responding. Many thanks for all your comments. @shals, glad to see you here after a long time. keep visiting. @zoonie, thank u @dawn, shukriyaa @komal, sure, will do :)
17 March, 2006 07:19
Anonymous said...
Such beautiful verses, dil bhar aaya!! You are blessed! Keep writing.
12 June, 2006 13:30
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(Original poetry by @kaunquest)
कभी सीने में धड़क बनाके रखा हमने तुम्हे
कभी अश्क़ों में तड़प बनाके रखा हमने तुम्हे
मेरी आह की गर्मी
मेरे लैब पे रुका हुआ वो नाम
नग्मों की घनक
ख्वाबों की महक
जीने का एहद
बनाके रखा हमने तुम्हे
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Close this window Jump to comment formJeene ka ehadh, banaake rakha humne tumhe..
Didnt get this sentence....wht does it mean??
17 February, 2006 05:42
The promise to live. Probably, the word is better transliterated as 'Ahd
17 February, 2006 06:11
Well how do you manage to write such awesome poetries???
Amazing(all i can say)
I should suggest you write a book, and i'll be the first one to buy ur book....
:))))>>>))))
Hugs n Kisses
17 February, 2006 09:34
"Aur aapne yun shayari likh likh kar apna deewana banake rakha humein....."
all d bst !!
keep writing n keep smiling :-)
17 February, 2006 10:20
sahi hai... kya likha hai...
lagta hai v-day ke uplaksh mein yeh saamne aaya hai ;)
well written!
GBU
17 February, 2006 18:34
@neetika, Thank u. :)
khudaa kare aapki yeh dua asar kar jaaye...
Kabhi ik kithaab likhe hum aur aap ko nazar kar jaaye..
I am glad that if I ever write a book, atleast one copy will get sold! and so maybe someday, I will. Thanks a lot :)
@emotions, Thank u! Keep visiting and I will keep writing :)
Isii deewaangi ke hum deewane hai..
@Manish, This should have been a V-day post, but was very busy this week. :) Thank u
and hope all of u had a great valentines day.
18 February, 2006 07:56
hey !!
Thanks for dropping by pal !!
Uhhmmm if i were to comment on your poems i would rather be quiet. cus its beyond words.
Everytime i read something like this i am lost in time..... a place where nothing else exists but all those memories.... and i sit and smile to myself...until i am banged it reality yet again.....
Thanks for being such a amazing poet.....and i bet you have an equally amazing and pure heart.
Take care
God Bless !!
Shals
19 February, 2006 05:05
Hmmm...
Thanks for the reply...
nice poem :)
20 February, 2006 10:05
Wha...
Jeene ke kayee bahane dhunde hain logone
Kuch dekar guzar jaane ki ada bahut khoob lagi humein ;)
bahut khoob....daad farmate hain....
Cheers
20 February, 2006 16:41
hey...this is so beautiful...keep it going
16 March, 2006 18:31
Folks, sorry abt the delay in responding. Many thanks for all your comments.
@shals, glad to see you here after a long time. keep visiting.
@zoonie, thank u
@dawn, shukriyaa
@komal, sure, will do :)
17 March, 2006 07:19
Such beautiful verses, dil bhar aaya!! You are blessed! Keep writing.
12 June, 2006 13:30