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"Panel Notes: "Bring It""

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Blogger sally said...

Thanks again, Leah!

I like your suggestion of "truthful" as alternative to "critical."

December 5, 2009 at 1:42 PM

Blogger Gabby said...

I like the idea of "truthful", too. Particularly to the author's own personal or even physical response to the work. I feel a huge sigh of relief whenever a critic actually mentions some part of their body, outside of their brain, interacting with the exhibition/artwork, or gives some sense of how the experience made them feel (not just what it made them think, though that is also interesting).

December 6, 2009 at 9:24 AM

Blogger Leah Sandals said...

Hey Sally and Gabby,

Thanks for your comments...

I never thought about the physiological-style reaction, Gabby, but that's an interesting angle.

I guess what also comes out of this for me is that what's also important or helpful is to have a lot of people writing their truthful reactions... I think one reason we might hold off from an honest reaction sometimes is that we feel we have to represent a broad range of viewpoints with just one review, maybe? But the more people we have writing honest criticism, the more diversity of opinion there will be, and hopefully a truer composite picture of the artwork provided.

So all this may involve a blue-sky fantasy of art-review quantity, as well as thoughts about quality!

December 8, 2009 at 9:16 AM

Anonymous Earl Miller said...

Hi Leah -

Truthful is a nice term. I felt that the term "critical" in some discussion during the evening and on A. Carson's blog, connoted debunking art a critic does not like in a rather venomous way. A rant is not beneficial (although Art Fag added humour to it and that worked). With truth though comes communication, and I become increasingly frustrated at how difficult it is to read art periodicals (here is where the best newspaper critics are doing things better, I believe). Much writing in these periodicals is unreadable. Why, for one example, must critics describe everything an artist makes in the passive voice (the painting was rendered, the video was presented). Boring. Boring. Boring. If a second manifestation of this panel comes out, I would like to here more about writer's craft as a way to get the truth across.

December 10, 2009 at 10:11 AM

Anonymous Earl said...

oops....hear not here (I better get that right if I am criticizing writers' craft).

December 10, 2009 at 10:12 AM

Blogger Leah Sandals said...

You're right on the passive voice front, Earl. There are many ways to improve art writing, and one way is certainly to make the writing more active.

Now I'm worried that I may have used some passive constructions in that previous sentence! But yes, totally agreed.

Part of the issue could be that the passive voice is preferred heavily in academic writing -- and that this then transfers over to writing in a lot of magazines. I think an emotional collary to that could be that none of us really want to sound "stupid" about art, and that using academic writing styles is a means to this end -- even if it is deathly to most receiving readers.

What do you think?

December 10, 2009 at 3:57 PM

Anonymous Earl said...

I agree with your last comment that people want to sound intelligent. Passive voice, superfluous language such as tautologies,and inaccurate use of undergrad semiotics often hide a general insecurity. BTW, your use of humour in writing was a breath of fresh air that has influenced my writing.

As for Gabby's point on the physiological, John Mays and Robin Peck put the critic's body to great use in their writing.

December 10, 2009 at 6:47 PM

Anonymous Anonymous said...

http://www.michaelmaranda.com/documents/writing/reluctant.htm

December 13, 2009 at 9:03 PM

Anonymous Anonymous said...

could it be said that another characteristic of "Canadian criticism" is that "we" are at our most critical (nuanced, reactionary, descriptive, loving, correct, and wrong) when it is actually private (ie: addressed between individuals, or behind closed doors)?

December 19, 2009 at 3:02 PM

Anonymous joegee1 said...

as an artist, how would one ask for critical writing or review - rather than languishing in obscurity. i decided to take full page ads in art periodicals. 2009 was "bordercrossings" magazine...up next:"sculpture magazine" april 2010- jun10 - 1 full page per issue concurrent. it allows an artist to participate at that level provided the work is strong..

December 26, 2009 at 4:21 PM

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