a nice story, but it seems finished at chpt 2 as is....
6:26 PM
Anonymous said...
Well, I agree and disagree. Very nice story but there are lots of unresolved issues. I feel like they have covered about 2/3 of the arc of the story. I'm left wanting to know more. Most important is I still have the feeling that Jamie is not secure and this could lead to problems. I hope they work out. It also seems a waste to have that huge apt. and not have it filled with partying friends.
10:52 PM
Chapter 2 of Short, Cute, and Sassy has now been posted in HTML, RTF, and PDF formats. Enjoy!
"Story update"
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RE: Short, Cute, and Sassy
a nice story, but it seems finished at chpt 2 as is....
6:26 PM
Well, I agree and disagree. Very nice story but there are lots of unresolved issues. I feel like they have covered about 2/3 of the arc of the story. I'm left wanting to know more. Most important is I still have the feeling that Jamie is not secure and this could lead to problems. I hope they work out. It also seems a waste to have that huge apt. and not have it filled with partying friends.
10:52 PM