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"What's the matter with kids these days?"

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Anonymous Anonymous said...

A "rant" would be an irate comment linked only tenuously to observable reality indicating a tendency of some kind on the part of the utterer or author. The author of "What, Me Read," I come reluctantly to my conclusions after two-and-a-half decades of observation and despite my fondness for many of the students whom I describe at a purely personal level. They're kids, after all, and most are "nice." But they show no sign of being able to do the intellectual things that a complex society will require them to do. So far as they are typical, this is an alarming phenomenon.

Sincerely,

Thomas F. Bertonneau

1:27 AM, February 09, 2009

Blogger Zachary Drake said...

Thank you for commenting, Professor Bertonneau. I agree that your essay was not a rant. It was a sustained discussion of a disturbing lack of intellectual capacity that you have observed in your students. Many of the examples you describe made me cringe, and in general I share your concerns about the weak mental capabilities of humans in general.

I was wondering if you could address some of the possibilities I raise in my post. I don't doubt the decline in intellectual quality that you are observing in your students. What I wonder is whether this is due to a broad decline in the intellectual capabilities of young people in our society, or whether it is due to the shifting demographics of people who attend college.

If the decline is broad-based and caused by various widespread cultural and technological factors, then there may be cause for an enormous amount of alarm and despair. If the content of our culture is really crippling people mentally at a much greater rate than in the past, we are indeed in trouble as a society. But if the decline in student intellectual quality is simply due to the larger number of people attending college, then we have a lesser (but still significant) problem on our hands.

It is clear from your essay that you believe cultural factors are responsible, but I'm trying to point out that there are other possibilities. You may in fact be right, but I think we need to gather more data before coming to that conclusion.

2:36 AM, February 09, 2009

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Thank you, Zachary.

I am a qualitative observer, not a quantitative one. I don't claim that my argument is scientific. It is merely closely observed and rooted in a long period of study.

It is true, as you say, that colleges now admit larger numbers of students than they used to. A dilution of competency is probably inevitable given the egalitarianism of existing admissions-standards. I might say, however, that my UCLA dissertation director finds my samples of student prose typical of those that he sees. UCLA is a top-level state university. SUNY College Oswego is a second-level state college. If the UCLA professor sees the same things that the SUNY Oswego professor sees, that is some corroboration of the guess that what the SUNY Oswego professor sees is not peculiar, but (more or less) universal in context.

I do think that cultural forces are largely responsible. Of course, the phrase "cultural forces" indicates a hugely complicated background. I cannot help but believe, even so, that the "flashing lights" and "sound effects" to which I refer in the article are non-trivial sources of stultification.

Once images replaced words (printed words) as the main medium of knowledge, shortly after WWII, processes started in motion that were bound to be intellectually corrosive in the largest sense because the printed word is the basis of literate society, but is also fragile. The light-and-sound diversions address the same optical sense that is required to immerse oneself in written discourse or narrative, after all.

I recommend Walter Ong's ORALITY AND LITERACY and Neil Postman's AMUSING OURSELVES TO DEATH as important discussions of what is at stake when non- or anti-literate stimuli compete with the written word in a technically and morally sophisticated society.

Sincerely,

Tom Bertonneau

3:16 AM, February 09, 2009

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Dear Professor Bertonneau,

I am curious about the relationship between literacy and the ability to analyze and understand movies.

Have you considered the possibility that some of your undergraduate students might be learning disabled? Have you encountered any students who are quite well equipped for high level reading and writing but cannot "read faces" in movies? The inability to "read faces" is a marker for several neurological/cognitive conditions.
Perhaps the quality or volume of sound is a problem for some students. Some of your undergraduates may be quite adept at reading comprehension but have difficulty processing sound or may simply be slightly hard of hearing.
Do you provide an opportunity for students to watch the same movie twice? After all, one of the benefits of books is that one can go back and reread.
Best, Jessica


Best, Jessica

5:46 AM, February 15, 2010

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