Rewrite 1: watching the sweep hand Rewrite 2: listening for the timer to beep Rewrite 3: watching for the sun to set Rewrite 4: looking for "the end" Rewrite 5: looking for an article stop
Comment: I looked for things besides an actual clock that represented the end to something, thus: the sweep hand of a clock that ticked off minutes, the sound of a timer that signaled the end of a specific time, the words that often signal the end of a movie, and the graphic device some publications use to show that an article stops.
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posted by Booksville Bookclub at 9:40 AM on Mar 22, 2010
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