Rewrite 1: going for the groin Rewrite 2: nuking the no-hit zone Rewrite 3: knock-out punch between the side pockets Rewrite 4: aiming for the target of last resort Rewrite 5: landing one that will make everyone wince
Comment: This interpretation favors the end-product or area versus the intention. How would you rewrite it differently to suggest someone is intentionally dealing unfairly?
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posted by Booksville Bookclub at 3:34 AM on Dec 10, 2010
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