Rewrite 1: get your geese in formation Rewrite 2: bring your circus into line Rewrite 3: stack your food into pyramids Rewrite 4: form your elements into periodic tables Rewrite 5: make lists of your thoughts
Comment: This was a hard one to rewrite without simply mirroring the original. It's all about putting things out of order into order, and I tried to be as varied in the subject matter as possible.
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... Getting organized
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posted by Booksville Bookclub at 1:14 AM on Jun 9, 2010
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