Rewrite 1: know where your feet meet the peet Rewrite 2: be one with your position Rewrite 3: be certain of your soundings Rewrite 4: stand firm with your roots Rewrite 5: know where the wind can't blow you, the river can't move you, and the cattle can't run you over
Comment: This one, which took a few days to work on, can be both about current position and how you see things, so I tried to reflect both.
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posted by Booksville Bookclub at 11:16 AM on Dec 12, 2011
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