Meaning: focus on something more worthwhile (example)
Rewrite 1: get a new hobby Rewrite 2: find a different obsession Rewrite 3: joust with a different windmill Rewrite 4: dude, read a book, play a game, go into a coma, but drop this, okay? Rewrite 5: Obi-Wan says, "This isn't the cause you were looking for...move along!"
Comment: This cliché is usually a put down, so I rewrote with that in mind.
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posted by Booksville Bookclub at 9:58 AM on May 30, 2010
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