Rewrite: gulp hot coffee Rewrite: dive into boiling water Rewrite: skinny dip in a scalding pool Rewrite: ride some white water Rewrite: cross a river at a deep spot
Comment: There are lots of ways to use water as a metaphor for getting into trouble and I've attempted to use some of them here.
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____ How they might say it at sea(commission may be paid on purchase)
posted by Booksville Bookclub at 9:26 AM on Dec 28, 2010
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