Rewrite 1: bee in her bouffant Rewrite 2: squirrel in her skirt Rewrite 3: hive in the attic Rewrite 4: rats inthe trash can
Comment: Think of vexing situations involving nature and you have an opportunity for a recast. I started close to the cliché and moved away from it, staying in the theme. Also, I found one other interpretation of the idiom: an obsessive idea, which I didn't address in the rewrite.
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