Rewrite 1: tap it down Rewrite 2: keep it low Rewrite 3: keep it under a decible Rewrite 4: put a silencer on it Rewrite 5: soundproof it Rewrite 6: mute it
Comment: "It" is noise, "down" is volume. Stow it, buddy. Any creative way to say it is better than "Keep it down."
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posted by Booksville Bookclub at 1:45 PM on Jul 6, 2011
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