Meaning: literally, big as a cow (or pig), carrying excessive fat (example)
Rewrite 1: huge as a hippo Rewrite 2: stout as a sumo Rewrite 3: plump as an Easter feaster Rewrite 4: big as a bassoon Rewrite 5: corpulent as a vat of lard Rewrite 6: wide as the rings of a big city circus
Comment: I varied the recast from big to fat to wide to provide ample examples.
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posted by Booksville Bookclub at 12:59 PM on May 14, 2010
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