Meaning: around the next curve in the road (example)
Rewrite: beyond the dip in the road Rewrite: up past the light and to the right Rewrite: next stop past the turnpike Rewrite: just yonder a bit Rewrite: up the road a piece
Comment: This is often a visual cue in absence of measured distance, so almost any noticable change in landscape will do. The last two are more nebulous but probably reasonable alternatives.
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posted by Booksville Bookclub at 5:26 PM on Jul 5, 2011
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