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Rewrite 1: the left hand and right hand refuse to shake Rewrite 2: the left hand and right hand aren't talking Rewrite 3: the left hand is signing Latin, the right hand is signing Greek Rewrite 4: the left hand is lost and the right hand won't ask for directions Rewrite 5: the left side of the brain doesn't know what the right side of the brain is thinking Rewrite 6: the cows don't know what the horses are doing
Comment: The last one kind of comes out of left field, but I wanted something different that still illustrated the point.
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posted by Booksville Bookclub at 7:32 AM on Dec 9, 2010
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