Rewrite 1: do a paint job Rewrite 2: cover the dents and bumps Rewrite 3: brick over the chasm Rewrite 4: cover the thorns with rose pedals Rewrite 5: soften the sow with face powder Rewrite 6: cover ugly with ylgu (better written than said)
Comment: Part of my attempt to recast this cliché was to restate the idiom in another way, part of it was to restate the purpose suggested behind the words. Let me know what you come up with.
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posted by Booksville Bookclub at 8:59 AM on Jun 15, 2010
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