Rewrite 1: High as a crop duster Rewrite 2: High as a loon Rewrite 3: Tumbling in the clouds Rewrite 4: Partying past Everest Rewrite 5: Flying with the Shuttle
Comment: I tried to give some sense of the euphoria of intoxication accompanied with a sense of being above board. Some of it has a double entendre nature to it. How would you rewrite or recast this cliché and keep its dual nature?
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posted by Booksville Bookclub at 10:50 AM on Oct 29, 2010
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