Meaning: money is earned, not picked. Use examples and meanings. Rewrite 1: money doesn’t pop out as leaves in the garden Rewrite 2: you can’t hand-pick money like fruit on a tree Rewrite 3: money may seem like bulbs on a marquee, but it isn’t Rewrite 4: money doesn’t flow like water from a faucet
Comment: There are lots of other metaphors to pick from – books from a shelf, cans from a grocery store shelf, toys from a chest, bolts from a bin, photons2 from the sun, etc…
More reading about clichés What I found when I googled “clichés”: • AlterNet MediaCulture Please Pass the Clichés: “Pro sports are still fun to watch, but press conferences and players' remarks have become dry and inauthentic.”
Note: By providing links to other websites I am only showing you what is out there about clichés – I am not endorsing any content or opinion expressed there.
Check out the searchable alphabetical list of all my cliché rewrites available in the archive list at the right.
posted by Booksville Bookclub at 1:35 PM on Apr 21, 2006
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