Meaning: it won’t work. Use examples. Rewrite 1: it’s got no wingsn8b Rewrite 2: it won’t make it off the ground Rewrite 3: it might look like a boat, but it won’t float Rewrite 4: it lacks the means to “get up and go”
Comment: You could give this metaphor a hammer and some nails, but it won’t build a house. I’ve tried to provide several iterations to keep it from being just about flying.
More reading about clichés What I found when I googled “clichés”: • Christian Science Monitor: “Finally: A Sept. 11 story without the clichés.”
Note: By providing links to other websites I am only showing you what is out there about clichés – I am not endorsing any content or opinion expressed there.
Check out the searchable alphabetical list of all my cliché rewrites available in the archive list at the right.
posted by Booksville Bookclub at 1:05 PM on Apr 2, 2006
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Close this window Jump to comment formIt mustn't be a falcon.
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