Meaning: intensify a problem. Use examples. Rewrite 1:extinguish the fire with gasoline Rewrite 2: cool the burn with rubbing alcohol Rewrite 3: melt road ice with a bucket of water Rewrite 4: add name-calling to the argument
Comment: This one was harder to rewrite or recast than I thought it would be. Maybe it’s because you have to think of things you would never do, like throwing gasoline on a fire. What you end up with are things that sound unreasonable or counterintuitive.
More reading about clichés What I found when I googled “clichés”: • Quotes for Gardeners: Clichés: “Weather, Climate, Clichés…” and more.
Check out the new alphabetical list of all my cliché rewrites available in the archive list at the right. To search the page using Internet Explorer, just go to “Edit” in the top menu bar, select “Find”, then enter the cliché or a word from it.
posted by Booksville Bookclub at 11:07 AM on Feb 13, 2006
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