Meaning: to lose everything, especially financially. Use examples. Rewrite 1: have a financialenema Rewrite 2:fed my cash to the trash Rewrite 3: my wallet’s been turned inside out Rewrite 4: lost everything but my mind
Comment: As pedestrian as this cliché is, almost anything else will seem creative, which is where you want to go with this rewrite.
More reading about clichés What I found when I googled “clichés”: • Blogging with Bryan C. Hanks: “Sports clichés. Best prep softball facilities.”
posted by Booksville Bookclub at 11:01 AM on Jan 12, 2006
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