Meaning: only the most visible part of a much bigger whole. Use examples. Rewrite 1: just a jewel of a buried treasure Rewrite 2: only a penny of a pocketful of change Rewrite 3: just the street entrance of a 40-storynoun3 building Rewrite 4: but the flower of a long-rooted dandelion
Comment: I first established a larger whole then decribed on a smaller part; it helps to stick with something most people would recognize rather than something more obscure, although if you’re addressing a special audience you can most certainly pick an object perhaps known mostly or only to them.
More reading about clichés What I found when I googled “clichés”: • Colonial Clichés in a German Zoo? “Many zoos put on special exhibits in order to attract visitors. Most also attract little notice much less controversy. But one zoo in southern Germany is…”
posted by Booksville Bookclub at 10:16 AM on Dec 29, 2005
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