Meaning: you can help someone find something but you can’t make him take advantage of it. Use examples. Rewrite 1: you can take a horse to the hay, but you can’t make him eat it Rewrite 2: you can lead a cat to the litter box, but you can’t make her use it Rewrite 3: even a dog on a leash doesn’t always want to walk Rewrite 4: you can make some people leaders but they still want to follow
Comment: Rewriting this cliché can open a slew of different possibilities, and they don’t all have to follow the logical course. Rewrites 3 and 4 are good examples.
More reading about clichés What I found when I googled “clichés”: • Business phrases, jargon and business clichés, “Said what is an online database of quotes and quotations, covering politics, celebrities, models, famous quotations and topical articles, competitions.”
posted by Booksville Bookclub at 4:11 PM on Dec 6, 2005
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