Rewrite 1: porker for punishment Rewrite 2: pigging out on trouble Rewrite 3: foodie for foolishness Rewrite 4: bon vivant for burden Rewrite 5: homesick for the hostile
Comment: The synonyms for "glutton" tend toward the gourmand, but the realistic side of this cliché is that these are people who over consume rather than enjoy the finer elements of something. That's why I've rewritten toward that aspect. You might need to work on the other.
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posted by Booksville Bookclub at 1:01 PM on Jun 17, 2010
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