tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3020099.post114663402515793970..comments2007-04-17T00:04:09.664-05:00Jesus Alihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02722818768309537539noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3020099.post-1146695061173373202006-05-03T17:24:00.000-05:002006-05-03T17:24:00.000-05:00

comments on pdf:<BR/><BR/>joanna:<BR/>i think the end is a bit predictable and not as interesting as leaving your "goal" unstated. doing this project in effect states your "goal" - narratizing failed relationships in the hopes of making some sense of them - so to restate doesn't add much, and sort of trivializes the end. i still think ending with "happy and bored" is the more powerful ending.<BR/

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