tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post115044026156708356..comments2007-02-10T22:58:50.184-05:00Mike Younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01125676207376106849mikeayoung@gmail.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post-1152782649365357912006-07-13T05:24:00.000-04:002006-07-13T05:24:00.000-04:00It's not really traditionally pretty. What's pretty about eating Mini-Wheats? Some of the lines have pretty things in them. I don't think the poem is pretty. I think the poem has nice earrings maybe. If it's pretty it's like emo-girl pretty.<BR/><BR/>Also: it's not about her. If you didn't know her you would think more, I think. Those are very nice details about the tits and crank. Thank you for sharing them.Mike Younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01125676207376106849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post-1152759380714592512006-07-12T22:56:00.000-04:002006-07-12T22:56:00.000-04:00you're way gone-- but none of us are way<BR/><BR/>gone, Keighley.<BR/><BR/>i would change that line break<BR/><BR/>also<BR/><BR/>this is a very pretty poem about a stupid fat girl who sells crank and bought tits with her financial aid.<BR/><BR/>what's up wit dat foo?Bryanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13359105032248441307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post-1151081864041800812006-06-23T12:57:00.000-04:002006-06-23T12:57:00.000-04:00it wasn't MEANT to be, but it CAN be.<BR/>i have a serious problem with commenting on people's pages without prior knowledge of the posts that preceded it, nor the initial blog entry that started it. i will go back and read your poem...Chuckhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16371387885950683595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post-1150966964526123822006-06-22T05:02:00.000-04:002006-06-22T05:02:00.000-04:00Is that what I think it is, Chuck? Those are good additions to the list, though maybe context could save stuff like "cut."<BR/><BR/>"Kwap?" Fuck no. Kwap is a good one.<BR/><BR/>Trust me: this whole poem was an apology for using the word "grace."Mike Younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01125676207376106849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post-1150957874703010632006-06-22T02:31:00.000-04:002006-06-22T02:31:00.000-04:00bestow, honor, salvage, mistake, character, leverage, danger, prowler, cut, slide, kwap, end, beatify, dutiful.Chuckhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16371387885950683595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post-1150829168670828152006-06-20T14:46:00.000-04:002006-06-20T14:46:00.000-04:00I've been listening to "The Eraser." Love it, of course. Thanks, again. :) Sorry I was so out of it when you brought it over. I was kinda high on anti-nausea meds. So...how about that track-list, eh? I want to rip it to my iPod but can't, really, until I have track names. No hurry or anything...K.E. Hollandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02886995732431375283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post-1150697125827452612006-06-19T02:05:00.000-04:002006-06-19T02:05:00.000-04:00Thanks alls y'alls for all the comments.<BR/><BR/>Eric: yes, yes, I want to try that now, but I'm afraid it would make me look like I'm too rich<BR/><BR/>Angela: that's weird, I guess it is somewhat the same, the neglect, the beautiful neglect, maybe, maybe<BR/><BR/>Alex: We have discussed this. Gay is as gay does. Consider the frillies of the lield.<BR/><BR/>Michael: Thank you and you have a cool first name.Mike Younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01125676207376106849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post-1150582172345720612006-06-17T18:09:00.000-04:002006-06-17T18:09:00.000-04:00greatmichaelfhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10336674038012348448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post-1150511747882082272006-06-16T22:35:00.000-04:002006-06-16T22:35:00.000-04:00i really like the second stanza. but the whole thing was great, oh, and you are a fucking retard for not knowing how to spell caterpillar. <BR/><BR/>i left your possesions with bryan sorry we never got to say goodbye (that sounds so dramatic).<BR/><BR/>To The People Who Read These Comments: Mike and I are not gay. Not even a little. I mean, sure, we spoon sometimes when we're lonely and I mean, shit, it gets cold in june. People need to stay warm.Alexhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02249021702295051362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post-1150492193333025662006-06-16T17:09:00.000-04:002006-06-16T17:09:00.000-04:00"I was stupid when I saw her and thought hooray for pear and gorgonzola pizza in my New York City summer! Fuck everyone!"<BR/><BR/>Reminds me vaguely of being in love. No idea why.A.S. Galvanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08628326041538817721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post-1150484354287545252006-06-16T14:59:00.000-04:002006-06-16T14:59:00.000-04:00Mike, this is my favorite to date. (I gots no problem with hairdryer).<BR/><BR/>Maybe instead of 3 letter words, you should only spell with the 2nd half of the alphabet. There's nothing a e i can do that o u can't.Gelsingerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10399085537060016712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post-1150480172955860472006-06-16T13:49:00.000-04:002006-06-16T13:49:00.000-04:00Thanks for the comments, Kate. I fixed caterpillar. It's never intentional. I spell atrociously. =( I should just start using three letter words for everything.Mike Younghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01125676207376106849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25161207.post-1150466653827469952006-06-16T10:04:00.000-04:002006-06-16T10:04:00.000-04:00<I>...and<BR/>we left no lasting grace, only<BR/>its opposite -- riddens -- that<BR/>brands the broken like a long noon.</I><BR/><BR/>I really like that bit. Very beautiful. The only part I'm not too fond of would be the "<I>what about hairdryers?</I>" I was hoping for something slightly more poignant after "like <I>you don't understand, you don't</I>". Also...not sure if it was intentional or not, but you spelled "caterpillar" wrong. :)<BR/><BR/>Cool poem. Lots of pretty language.K.E. Hollandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02886995732431375283noreply@blogger.com