tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22518015.post-58846947544693026482007-06-15T11:40:00.000-06:002007-06-15T11:40:00.000-06:00Cool piece, cool style. Enjoyed it from the git-go. Gave just enough in each sentence to urge the reader on to the next, yet fill him with info a the same time. Enjoyed the clear character descriptions of the gangly kid and "hair the color of beats". 5-star ending that keeps one thinking about the story after it's over.Christopher Pimentalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09425426301377689603noreply@blogger.com